tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3867360018600915426.post8546100328344394705..comments2023-06-07T08:33:02.539-07:00Comments on Split Your Heart, Not Your Tongue: Cheers! (OctPoWriMo2014)-Day 12Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09231498937832319896noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3867360018600915426.post-51577071554609703512014-10-12T10:48:21.605-07:002014-10-12T10:48:21.605-07:00Thanks a lot! I was actually going for something l...Thanks a lot! I was actually going for something like that. I tried to make it flow as much as possible. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231498937832319896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3867360018600915426.post-84319625461038103732014-10-12T10:45:37.423-07:002014-10-12T10:45:37.423-07:00Thank you. Thank you. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231498937832319896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3867360018600915426.post-13247950674886960962014-10-12T10:13:42.890-07:002014-10-12T10:13:42.890-07:00Wow. Such a drumbeat throughout. Woooosh... wooosh...Wow. Such a drumbeat throughout. Woooosh... woooshh... whooosh... almost a pulse.<br /><br />Enjoyed the read very much....Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3867360018600915426.post-63142920729647390072014-10-12T10:09:19.298-07:002014-10-12T10:09:19.298-07:00I loved the last line - and it leaves a lot of roo...I loved the last line - and it leaves a lot of room for the reader to figure out what you are obsessing about. Nice work. Lance Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11900875568954965603noreply@blogger.com